| Vampire Verbs |
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| By Laura Wright | |
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Active Verbs (or Writing In Active Voice): This is the method we are all encouraged to write with. Passive writing drains your creative flare. It masks the action with words. Passive voice sucks the ferocity of your writing out, leaving nothing except wordy sentences. Writing in an active voice keeps your material simple, sharp and immediate. It paints a clear picture for your reader and keeps them reading actively. There is one simple equation to follow when writing in active voice is: Subject + Verb + Direct Object The best teacher is example, below I will post a few sets of sentences. One written in passive voice, one written in active: Passive: Active: Passive: Active: Passive: Active: Passive: Active: Passive: Active: Passive: Active: The Passive voice should be avoided, as much as possible, by creative writers. This form is mainly accepted among technical and scientific authors. It adds words and creates needless material which your readers must endure. This can easily prove to be distracting and infuriating if the audience is eager to reach the outcome of the story.
Laura Wright is the author of While I'm Dying and is a freelance writer/photographer for The Business Journal. |